After spending time writing an argument essay and reviewing the piece later, I have come to conclusions. First of all, I am mostly happy with the final outcome of this essay after putting so much time and effort into it. Throughout the essay, many of my strengths in this writing style can be found.
Strengths:
-Strong, arguable claims
-Voice with hints of my personal opinions but still essay-like
-Supportive data backed up with a solid warrant
- Unique wise statements and conlcusion-enders
These main strengths made my essay as best as it is and I will be sure to carry them on through high school.
In contrast, this writing piece also came with it's flaws. Luckily, there was not as many weaknesses as strengths, but some were still present. After reviewing comments and suggestions, I have found that for the most part none of my shortcomings were major enough to hold down the essay. My weaknesses included: arguable statements, repetition or points, too much personal input, and spelling/grammatical errors. As for my goals in high school, I hope to turn all of my weaknesses into strengths, and continue to use my existing strengths. Lastly, I hope to build new habits that improve my writing and add diversity to my essays.
Strengths:
-Strong, arguable claims
-Voice with hints of my personal opinions but still essay-like
-Supportive data backed up with a solid warrant
- Unique wise statements and conlcusion-enders
These main strengths made my essay as best as it is and I will be sure to carry them on through high school.
In contrast, this writing piece also came with it's flaws. Luckily, there was not as many weaknesses as strengths, but some were still present. After reviewing comments and suggestions, I have found that for the most part none of my shortcomings were major enough to hold down the essay. My weaknesses included: arguable statements, repetition or points, too much personal input, and spelling/grammatical errors. As for my goals in high school, I hope to turn all of my weaknesses into strengths, and continue to use my existing strengths. Lastly, I hope to build new habits that improve my writing and add diversity to my essays.